Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Piano-ish

When I was 8 I played and played
but, it never came out right
I practiced and practiced
notes and notes every single night
but, after I tried 4,000 times,
I siad, "It's sort of piano-ish!"
By JR
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5 comments:

  1. viewfromroom15February 8, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    I like how you said 4,000 times. I also like the line but, it never came out right.
    BY~KM

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  2. viewfromroom15February 8, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    I like how you rymed night and right. I really like your poem!
    ~NL~

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  3. viewfromroom15February 15, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    I really like your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. viewfromroom15March 1, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    Your poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. viewfromroom15March 1, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    Your poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!
    ~DS~

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